Thursday, January 15, 2009

Diary of Rachel Dustwater Chapter 4!

Here it is!

November 30, 1876
We packed up everything in the carriage and were ready to leave, but they were stopped as I began to cry. “What’s wrong?” asked Ma
“Can’t I just say bye to one of my friends before we go,” I sobbed. “Of course,” said Ma and she watched me as I walked into the beautiful sunrise to go to my friend, Emily’s house.
I knocked on the door and Emily answered it.
I gave her a big hug and said, “I’m leaving to go to Texas!”
“Your Ma finally decided where to go?” said Emily in shock.
“Yes!” I said sadly. “I just wanted to say, bye.”
“Bye!” cried Emily and she gave me a big hug and I left.
I sadly went back to Ma, ready for this long, sad trip.

I know what you're probably thinking " Awww! This story is going to be sad!" Well, that's wrong. It's only these first chapters that are sad.
Well, now it's time for the tip of the day. It is... advertise! It builds up your confidence and it lets people know about it. I advertiseed in my last post! Oh, speaking of that post I've only handed out 2 Rachel handouts, but oh well. I got plenty of time.

Keep on writing,
Chrissy

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